Post by Pyrite on May 22, 2012 20:31:32 GMT -6
Name: Burntpelt
Gender: Tom
Age: 47 moons
Rank: Warrior
Clan: ThunderClan
Short description: brown and black black mottled tabby tom with green eyes
Long description: Burntpelt (click) is thickly built. He has shorter, muscular legs and cream claws. His body is thick and heavy, but it's all muscle. His fur is shorter but long enough to keep him warm in winter. It's base is a light fawn color. Then he has darker mahogany on his back. Then he has odd thick swirly black tabby stripes. His eyes are soft green,his nose pink and he has a bit of white on his chin. He often has a devious look in his eyes so some might describe him as devilishly handsome.
Personality: Burntpelt is a bit of a mischief maker. He is mostly serious except when it comes to she-cats. He often puts himself out for them and is often rejected despite everything. He hasn't found anyone to woo in a while, though there are rumors that he is father to Fawnleg's kits(though he's not). He is quiet but speaks his mind and is often sarcastic. He has an optimistic outlook on life. He is considerate though and often puts their wants and needs before his own.
History: Burntkit was born half-clan. He never knew his mother, only his father, Blackwater. Blackwater often told him about his mother, Rabbitfire, and aparant brother, Whitekit. Burntkit was raised well and became very obediant.
Burntkit was soon apprenticed and given to an ambitious tom named Kestrelface. Burntpaw met his mother and brother at his first gathering. Rabbitfire snubbed Burntpaw knowing who he was, but Whitepaw, who didn't know they were brothers, grew to be close friends with Burntpaw. One day at a gathering, Whitepaw was very angry and practically attacked Burntpaw. He had just found out who his parents were and that Burntpaw was his brother. Whitepaw was angry in general and soon after the gathering, Burntpaw received word that Rabbitfire was dead. Burntpaw felt a pit of suspicion growing in his stomach.
Burntpaw was soon given his warrior name, Burntpelt. Whitepaw, now Whitewater, wasn't there. When he returned to camp, his father was dead. Burntpelt knew he was next. He went for a walk after his father's burial and was attacked by Whitewater. He fought his brother until they were both broken and bleeding when someone found them, both bleeding freely. Whitewater lost more blood than Burntpelt and died. Burntpelt has felt guilty and tried to avoid ShadowClan as much as possible.
Other:
Gender: Tom
Age: 47 moons
Rank: Warrior
Clan: ThunderClan
Short description: brown and black black mottled tabby tom with green eyes
Long description: Burntpelt (click) is thickly built. He has shorter, muscular legs and cream claws. His body is thick and heavy, but it's all muscle. His fur is shorter but long enough to keep him warm in winter. It's base is a light fawn color. Then he has darker mahogany on his back. Then he has odd thick swirly black tabby stripes. His eyes are soft green,his nose pink and he has a bit of white on his chin. He often has a devious look in his eyes so some might describe him as devilishly handsome.
Personality: Burntpelt is a bit of a mischief maker. He is mostly serious except when it comes to she-cats. He often puts himself out for them and is often rejected despite everything. He hasn't found anyone to woo in a while, though there are rumors that he is father to Fawnleg's kits(though he's not). He is quiet but speaks his mind and is often sarcastic. He has an optimistic outlook on life. He is considerate though and often puts their wants and needs before his own.
History: Burntkit was born half-clan. He never knew his mother, only his father, Blackwater. Blackwater often told him about his mother, Rabbitfire, and aparant brother, Whitekit. Burntkit was raised well and became very obediant.
Burntkit was soon apprenticed and given to an ambitious tom named Kestrelface. Burntpaw met his mother and brother at his first gathering. Rabbitfire snubbed Burntpaw knowing who he was, but Whitepaw, who didn't know they were brothers, grew to be close friends with Burntpaw. One day at a gathering, Whitepaw was very angry and practically attacked Burntpaw. He had just found out who his parents were and that Burntpaw was his brother. Whitepaw was angry in general and soon after the gathering, Burntpaw received word that Rabbitfire was dead. Burntpaw felt a pit of suspicion growing in his stomach.
Burntpaw was soon given his warrior name, Burntpelt. Whitepaw, now Whitewater, wasn't there. When he returned to camp, his father was dead. Burntpelt knew he was next. He went for a walk after his father's burial and was attacked by Whitewater. He fought his brother until they were both broken and bleeding when someone found them, both bleeding freely. Whitewater lost more blood than Burntpelt and died. Burntpelt has felt guilty and tried to avoid ShadowClan as much as possible.
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